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    dots Submission Name: Destructive heart killing me slowly dots
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    Author: Deep_slow
    ASL Info:    18/m/columbus ohio
    Elite Ratio:    2.67 - 2/5/13
    Words: 160
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 47
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1084



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       Can we ever find true love and if so will it stay that way cuz my love fade as it grows like a shirt warn to many times washed to many times


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    Destructive heart
    Impressing me
    Existing beef killing me
    Exhausting me
    Defying me
    Eluding you
    Confusing you
    Deceiving you
    Loosing you
    Controlling you
    Puling you
    Influencing you
    To see me as god
    But no man is god
    No man stands tall to me
    Is good to me
    Can look at me and belittle me
    Deceive me
    Or control me
    And you are women
    Can you look at me
    Be good to me
    Or deceive me
    Try and control me
    Women
    You are supposed to be better than me
    Stronger than me
    Smarter
    Or are you just faster than me
    Women are you fast
    Do you like it to be easy
    Or hard
    Women you represent love to me
    But love is weak
    Should love influence me
    Drive me
    Fill me
    Or can it feed me
    Lead me
    Strengthen me
    Or will it continue to deceive me
    Slowly kill me
    Believe me
    Women
    You love
    Is death




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