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    dots Submission Name: shoe box my heartdots
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    Author: milo stills
    Elite Ratio:    3.37 - 345/476/138
    Words: 146
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsshoe box my heartdots
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    Evidence of life

    My head is empty
    I wondered can anyone tell
    That any creativity is drug induced

    I slip into a coma and
    The top of my head slips with it
    Soft slow tremors violently rock my body

    And caress my heart of hearts
    My brain flies away on lead wings
    All that’s left is old images of wet thighs

    And they are fading fast into pornography
    I pour in some glue to make things stick
    But everything slips away

    “It must be to old.” I say to myself
    I found it in a shoe box
    Labeled with my name

    I peal away that label
    And drop it into my skull
    I will always have the memory of myself




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      You're looking for someone to bash, sorry you're not getting it from me. This piece is magnificent. A real original, stark symbolism and theme. Love it.
    | Posted on 2008-06-23 00:00:00 | by jayisademon | [ Reply to This ]


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