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shoe box my heart
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shoe box my heart
Evidence of life
My head is empty
I wondered can anyone tell
That any creativity is drug induced
I slip into a coma and
The top of my head slips with it
Soft slow tremors violently rock my body
And caress my heart of hearts
My brain flies away on lead wings
All that’s left is old images of wet thighs
And they are fading fast into pornography
I pour in some glue to make things stick
But everything slips away
“It must be to old.” I say to myself
I found it in a shoe box
Labeled with my name
I peal away that label
And drop it into my skull
I will always have the memory of myself
Submitted on 2008-06-23 00:12:51
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