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    dots Submission Name: Finance is Romancedots
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    Author: jayisademon
    ASL Info:    20/m/il
    Elite Ratio:    3.66 - 90/47/51
    Words: 118
    Class/Type: Poetry/Satire
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    dotsFinance is Romancedots
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    Come on and crush me.
    Do you need all that?
    The clothes, the house, the car.
    My baby gets what my baby wants.
    at all cost for profit loss.

    I'll work the skin off my bones.
    because that's what happiness is.
    Diamonds, and all the pretty things,
    that make life worth living.
    So I'll let them numb my brain,
    and de-sensitize me through wage freedom.
    My baby gets what my baby deserves.

    I'll die at 65 for a 401k.
    Because finance is romance,
    and dollars and cents are
    flowers and incense.
    I've surrendered my innocence.

    Just let me love you
    the way you need to be.
    I'll dress you in the silk,
    of financial stability.




    Submitted on 2008-06-23 17:10:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Ooh I feel like there's a struggle while needing to please and the ridiculousness of the chase for cash. I like the imagery contrast, it's like horrid torture of working 'skin off my bones' for something seemingly unimportant 'all the pretty things'. I like the rhyme and the numbers, lol it makes it more like ridiculing. The last stanza is interesting, due to the change in tone, it makes me wonder if it ends in resignation or in a different meaning (like bah I'll just work what you need not want).
    | Posted on 2008-06-30 00:00:00 | by arodase | [ Reply to This ]



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