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    dots Submission Name: Songdots
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    Author: dismal_s child
    ASL Info:    19/F/On A Carousel
    Elite Ratio:    3.24 - 451/419/172
    Words: 79
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 528
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 487



    Description:
       I may have reverted back to my old style. Idk.
    It's a carefree little poem so don't be brutal!


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    dotsSongdots
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    This is the song
    As I sit here on my bed
    This is the song
    Pounding in my Head

    You are:
    The only one I need
    You are:
    The reason I breathe

    Keep The kisses coming
    You made my smile return
    For God's sake I'm smiling within
    A smile that you earned

    So I sing a song and smile
    like I've lost my mind
    I sing and freaking smile
    Because you are mine.




    Submitted on 2008-06-23 18:09:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      baby
    aawww...
    I love you so very much okay and I hope to see you soon okay
    I love you sugar
    ~Darrell
    | Posted on 2008-06-25 00:00:00 | by anguished_child | [ Reply to This ]


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