To The Hip-Hop Heads

Author: 7makaveli Elite Ratio:    3.33 - 36 /43 /50 Words: 100

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To The Hip-Hop Heads

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Just why the fuck am I so obsessed with rhymes? It's this addiction, so musically inclined The social apathy to the demise of the craft Street poetry, absent on every path Why did I think something so true would last? I used to love H.E.R, but now the flame quivers Retrospective spins make me shiver A new generation is called upon to deliver The last cypher as she bleeds from the liver The underground ascends to the mainstreet No billboard chase and no stale beef Just stories, knowledge and words of wisdom, All tamed by the beat and the rhythm.

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