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    dots Submission Name: To The Hip-Hop Headsdots
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    Author: 7makaveli
    Elite Ratio:    3.39 - 36/42/45
    Words: 100
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsTo The Hip-Hop Headsdots
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    Just why the fuck am I so obsessed with rhymes?
    It's this addiction, so musically inclined
    The social apathy to the demise of the craft
    Street poetry, absent on every path
    Why did I think something so true would last?
    I used to love H.E.R, but now the flame quivers
    Retrospective spins make me shiver
    A new generation is called upon to deliver
    The last cypher as she bleeds from the liver
    The underground ascends to the mainstreet
    No billboard chase and no stale beef
    Just stories, knowledge and words of wisdom,
    All tamed by the beat and the rhythm.




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