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    dots Submission Name: Mineral Rightsdots
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    Author: Cloacina
    ASL Info:    25/F/KY
    Elite Ratio:    7.78 - 20/23/22
    Words: 334
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
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    dotsMineral Rightsdots
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    God took a piece of Heaven
    and rounded it out
    cut a marble from a crystal ball
    to set life upon.

    But hell crept across the Earth,
    and took over like kudzu.
    Earth is where Heaven and hell collide.

    Fireworks light up the roadside,
    purple chocolate stems spray up, over and down
    ending in large sparks of white
    of dual sided blooms,
    a dusty, gentle green and purple chocolate peticoat
    for the white star flowers with dusty mauve markings
    I breathe in the strong smell
    nearing a fusion of lavender and honeysuckle
    white, liquid ash falls down my fingers.
    I marvel at a milkweed flower.

    Birch smells a little like a fine baccer,
    sweet and spicy
    only without the acrid tinge
    that smells like that time I got sick
    when I took a chaw.

    I pop a piece in my mouth
    and chew it to a wet straw.
    As three horses with a baby cross a dusty road,
    brown mohawks racing down their necks,
    a lone turkey nervously climbs the hillside,
    and a black mountain in the road turns out to be a turtle with orange markings,
    looking like Halloween,
    tucking itself into its shell
    cautiously,
    as I help it out of the highway made of earth and rock.

    A deer timidly pecks its way in front of me,
    while butterflies,
    birds,
    and summer's last cicadas,
    dot the land with life.

    Light and shadow waltzed
    through valleys
    and over ancient mountain tops,
    sunbeams and shade playing hopscotch across hills and hollers,
    rolling down the slopes like children,
    as I walked to a spot in paradise,
    where I could see hell
    where Eden had been razed over
    and it crept up to the edge of the remanant of Shangrai-la
    where we stood,
    and I prayed that when we died,
    Heaven would not have mineral rights
    that belonged to the people
    living elsewhere
    those in hell who did not know
    and did not care
    what they were taking from us.




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      ...and I prayed that when we died,
    Heaven would not have mineral rights
    that belonged to the people
    living elsewhere
    those in hell who did not know
    and did not care
    what they were taking from us.


    This is a cool explosion of the natural and mechanical. Fireworks, and all these plants, trees, animals.

    Cool.

    (a few misspellings here and there, btw.)
    | Posted on 2008-06-27 00:00:00 | by etheror | [ Reply to This ]



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