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    Author: Roselize
    Elite Ratio:    2.92 - 21/26/19
    Words: 66
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angst
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    Description:
       I wrote this last year in art class. I was bored till death and I felt like writing something dramatic.


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    dotsMemoriesdots
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    Do you remember,
    The end of November,
    The wind in the trees,
    The cold winter breeze,

    Do you remember,
    How we walked away,
    Our prints in the snow,
    For no-one to know,

    Do you remember,
    The quiet of the night,
    No passing by cars,
    Us under the stars,

    Do you remember,
    That cold, chilling shot,
    Before all the past I'm afraid
    You forgot?




    Submitted on 2008-06-24 07:52:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      So poignant and sad, and so very, very lovely! (with, again, our favorite time of year! It seems that I, too, am constantly writing of winter!) bravo.... bravo... bravo...
    | Posted on 2008-06-24 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]


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