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    dots Submission Name: Cocaine Beatdots
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    Author: revol
    ASL Info:    18/F/Far away from you
    Elite Ratio:    2.87 - 12/13/11
    Words: 107
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 53
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 664



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    dotsCocaine Beatdots
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    You know I don't mind your cocaine beat
    I want some of it too
    Your lips trying to make a sentence
    Which I cannot understand.

    Fake love, lying every day,
    Death and pressure all around us,
    Alec, you know I care,
    And I want that cocaine beat too.

    You were once what I am now
    And I will end up as you are now
    Taking acid and snorting Xanax
    Alec, baby, watch out for police.

    Cocaine beat, cocaine beat,
    You only let me blow you when you're high,
    Cocaine beat, I love you so,
    Cocaine beat, acid shit, speed hit,
    I love you.




    Submitted on 2008-06-24 13:27:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Hey.

    I like this poem, though it could use some revising. I can relate to it, being a former drug-addict too. I hope you get out of that hell soon. Your poem probably won't make sense to someone who was never a junkie, but I understand you and I wish you all the best. Good luck with your writing, and thanks for stalking me. :D

    Luv, Eliza XX
    | Posted on 2008-06-26 00:00:00 | by Piper | [ Reply to This ]



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