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    dots Submission Name: No Other Waydots
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    Author: b_v_grant
    ASL Info:    23/M/Jamaica
    Elite Ratio:    3.27 - 125/118/69
    Words: 187
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 499
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1325



    Description:
       Just a little something I wrote for basketball.


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    dotsNo Other Waydots
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    Verse 1

    My mind cannot lose focus,
    My body must not quit,
    I'm trying hard to be aggressive and get in it.
    My breath is leaving slowly,
    Its hard for me to breathe,
    I'm fighting my way through this,
    Cuz there is no other way
    There is no other way

    Chorus

    For me...,
    For me...,
    When I'm going up and cant look back,
    There's no other way,
    For me...,
    Be free...,
    When I'm going up and cant look back,
    There's no other way.

    Verse 2

    The task at hand is heavy,
    With strength I'll make it through,
    Its starting to be steady and I will push you.
    The clock will keep on ticking,
    The seconds counting down,
    I'm going to move right through you,
    Cuz there is no other way
    There is no other way

    Chorus

    Instrumentals

    Now there's alot on the line,
    Still I'm going by.
    "There's no other way"

    Now there's alot on the line
    Still I'm going by,
    "When I'm going up and cant look back"
    There is no other way... For me....

    Chorus




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      It reminds me of Rocky movies, hence I like it. ;)

    Keep on writing,

    Eliza XX
    | Posted on 2008-06-26 00:00:00 | by Piper | [ Reply to This ]


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