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    dots Submission Name: Kissed By An Angeldots
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    Author: daughterofdeath
    ASL Info:    17/F/West Virginia
    Elite Ratio:    4.95 - 252/239/191
    Words: 348
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Depressed
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       This is about David. if you read my journal entry, you'll know who he was to me. i was really starting to fall in love with him.

    Dedication: David Henderson


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    dotsKissed By An Angeldots
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    I had some time last night
    An angel kissed me in my dreams.
    He's been gone for a while
    But I know that he is watching me.
    An angel came and caressed my face
    Then he softly kissed my lips.
    The kiss we both wanted before
    The kiss that we had to miss.
    I'd give the world if I
    Could just see my angel again.
    I wish that I could do everything
    That I wanted to do back then.

    I was awake late one night
    And I watched as a star fell.
    Before I said my wish,
    I was kissed by an angel.
    His lips were soft and sweet
    As they laid against mine.
    An angel kissed me that night
    I may be out of my mind.

    Now that it's after the fact,
    I think I imagined it all.
    The more I got attached to you
    The harder I had to fall.
    I see my angel everywhere I go,
    His soul is following me.
    His picture is stuck in my heart
    For only me to see.
    Every night I lay awake
    Hoping he would come back once more
    Even though we he came back to me,
    What am I holding on for?

    I was awake late one night
    And I watched as a star fell.
    Before I said my wish,
    I was kissed by an angel.
    His lips were soft and sweet
    As they laid against mine.
    An angel kissed me that night
    I may be out of my mind.

    An angel kissed me
    Again last night.
    He held me in his arms
    And made me feel alright.
    Since May the ninth
    I've wished for his touch.
    When I last saw him,
    I didn’t know I'd miss him so much.

    I was awake late last night
    And I watched as a star fell.
    Before I said my wish,
    I was kissed by an angel.
    His lips were soft and sweet
    As they laid against mine.
    An angel kissed me last night
    I may be out of my mind.







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    ||| Comments |||
      That is so absolutely beautiful and full of deep emotion that I wanted to cry.. I had a really good friend whom I had known for thirteen years, ever since the beginning of highschool, and of course had always had a crush on him as well.. Years later he and I dated a little for a time, but didn't officially get together because of how far away he was living at that time.. I decided to move on and found my current boyfriend, whom I love dearly, and almost a year after my man and I got together my best friend killed himself.. I miss him so very much still and loved him very dearly, but he is gone now and every once in a while I see him in my dreams and hope that he is watching over me..
    Anyway, a beautiful write that obviosuly touched me deeply..
    Thanks you,

    Tiffany aka Maskannai
    | Posted on 2008-06-24 00:00:00 | by Maskannai | [ Reply to This ]


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