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    dots Submission Name: Evidence of life dots

    Author: milo stills
    Elite Ratio:    3.37 - 345/476/138
    Words: 181
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsEvidence of life dots

    Evidence of life

    My head is empty, and at the same time
    Over flowing, swirling with chemicals
    Can anyone tell this poem is drug induced?

    I slip into an ego-driven coma and
    The top of my head slips with it
    Soft slow tremors violently rock my body

    And caress my heart of hearts
    My brain flies away on lead wings
    All that’s left is old images of wet thighs

    And they are fading fast into pornography
    I pour in some glue to make things stick
    But everything is lost to time and selfishness

    “It must be too old.” I say to myself
    I found it in a shoe box filled with legos
    And labeled with my name, written in a childlike scrawl

    I peal away that label and drop it into my skull
    Savor the feeling of being full if only for an instant
    I will always have the memory of myself

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