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    dots Submission Name: Concentratedots
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    Author: PhalenSky
    ASL Info:    17/Female/Clarksville, MD
    Elite Ratio:    4.19 - 3/3/13
    Words: 180
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Trapped
    Total Views: 58
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1348



    Description:
       This is the first song that I ever wrote. Of course I was in school when I wrote it. Where else?


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    dotsConcentratedots
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    There is nothing
    Hanging on the wall
    Not a painting or picture in the hall
    Even if there were it would still be plain
    It doesn't matter to you
    But to me
    I think I'm going insane
    'Cause I can't concentrate
    Cooperate
    Appreciate
    It's the one weakness I hate
    The fact that I can't concentrate
    Cooperate
    Appreciate
    It's the one weakness I hate
    The fact that I can't
    Concentrate

    In my mind
    I've closed the gate
    To all the world around me
    Everything is getting even more
    Impossible to see
    The walls are closing in
    I feel as though I've committed a sin
    Stop staring at me like I'm mad
    No, I'm not feeling sick or bad
    No, there's nothing to be had
    There's only one thing that I need:
    I need to get out
    I'm not going to pout
    I can't even shout
    The only few things I can't do is
    Cooperate
    Appreciate
    And the one weakness I hate
    The fact that I can't concentrate
    I can't cooperate
    Appreciate (anything)
    I can't concentrate
    Can't concentrate
    Can't concentrate...




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