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    dots Submission Name: Drowning in Paradisedots
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    Author: PhalenSky
    ASL Info:    17/Female/Clarksville, MD
    Elite Ratio:    4.19 - 3/3/13
    Words: 215
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 42
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    dotsDrowning in Paradisedots
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    Drowning in black
    Drowning in white
    Gray is the only thing in sight
    My lungs are filled with disease
    Dark cloud hangs over me
    Think clumps of dust make it hard to breathe
    There is a better place
    I know
    Because I saw you go
    And you came back shining so bright
    Next to you I look so white
    But still I'd rather not leave
    I'd rather not go
    Because then I'd be drowning in you
    Drowning in light
    Drowning in Paradise

    There is no place
    I'd rather not see
    Than the place you came from for me
    Maybe it's beautiful
    Maybe it's bright
    After all it's paradise
    But things will still burn
    Things will still fall
    Bad things will still happen in a perfect little world

    But still I'd rather not leave
    I'd rather not go
    Because then I'd be drowning in you
    Drowning in light
    Drowning in Paradise

    Drowning in black
    Drowning in white
    Gray is the only thing in sight

    But still I'd rather not leave
    I'd rather not go
    Because then I'd be drowning in you
    Drowning in light
    Drowning in a good place
    That's the worst way to die
    By
    Drowning in Paradise
    Drowning in Paradise
    Drowning in Paradise
    Who'd want to drown in Paradise?




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