I loved this, though I can already tell im going to have trouble explaining why. It was very different from most poetry, has no form, jumps around a lot, even the tenses get mixed up from time to time. But the message presented, and the innocence that accompanies it, is wonderful. I love the simple description of a simple girl, in all her daydreaming glory. As she travels from the hillside to a slightly veiled position underneath a tree that changes colors with the light. Its a beautifully vivid picture. I.... cant go much more into depth with this one, I'd like to, but I can't find the words anymore. Its enough to say it was well done and thoroughly enjoyed.
A pretty girl too cool in the shade
moved to the sunny side
and thought that life was made
for lazy time and its abide
but soonly knowing all would fade
into life gone aseeking place to hide
from time and its struggles laid
down to thoughts that have died.