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    dots Submission Name: Masqueradedots
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    Author: DorianGrymstone
    ASL Info:    23/male/West Hills
    Elite Ratio:    1.68 - 8/11/13
    Words: 166
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 46
    Average Vote:    3.0000
    Bytes: 1061



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    dotsMasqueradedots
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    Come one come all
    To the masquerade ball

    Dance & sing, drink to your hearts content
    Drown away thyn souls lament

    Be joyous be gay
    For this night shall burn through till day

    The meat is fine, so is thyn wine
    Taste the plethora of cheese
    I guarantee thou shall be pleased

    Mesmerizing beauties found all around
    Lay thyn eyes upon their gaze & thou shall be bound

    With a twist of my wrist & a twirl of my finger
    Your worthless souls shall no longer linger

    Eat the food drink thyn drink
    The more thou tryest the less thee shall think

    Join my minions do not fear
    The life thou hast lived shall not re-appear

    Thyn heads hang heavy & legs fall weak
    Thyn mouths are sewed shut so never shall you speak

    Minds are closed, ears are plugged
    Thou hast ripped out thyn eyes
    And sentenced thyn souls to the masquerade of lies.





    Submitted on 2008-06-24 22:19:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Interesting! I love how you used old english type of writing, it makes it more interesting. However, this line "The more you try the less you shall think" should use the old english type of writing too so the flow is consistant.

    I really like this though.
    | Posted on 2008-06-26 00:00:00 | by riotgrrl1881 | [ Reply to This ]



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