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    dots Submission Name: Built To Destroydots
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    Author: DorianGrymstone
    ASL Info:    23/male/West Hills
    Elite Ratio:    1.68 - 8/11/13
    Words: 198
    Class/Type: Prose/Dark
    Total Views: 72
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1184



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    dotsBuilt To Destroydots
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    Humanity, the parasitic force responsible for the destruction of God’s most spectacular creation, our living home, mother earth. Humans the most “superior” of creations and yet they are the most feeble, the most exposed, the most spineless, the most destructive, the most oblivious, the most selfish, the most venomous creatures to walk the earth. The rapid consumption of planetary assets, the pestilential discharges, the careless destruction of living matter is completely inconsequential and the value of life… meaningless to them. Little do these worthless wastes of oxygen realize they in fact are their own destructors, they are their own plague. Human life was not meant for plunderous behavior, their selfish desires caused them to become the most nightmarish parasites to ever infect this planet. With one hand in the sky they cry out destruction and aversion for the lives of each other and every other living creature. Now the journey is spreading to darkness, these fungal-like beings wont stop devouring until they’ve consumed all that can be. “Humanity, you are the enemy, you are the architects of the apocalypse, for you are the one who is built to destroy.”




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      as i could tell from the first few lines, this was done in a similar style to the first one i commented on. as misanthropic as it seems, you have touched on a very uneasy thought: that humans are the parasites of this planet, and that through our actions we will single-handedly be responsible for it's fall. also like the first one, instead of told in a poetic fashion, it is more like a bold slap in the face. the message cannot be any more clear.

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    thanks for your nice words on VtW
    | Posted on 2008-08-12 00:00:00 | by perihelion | [ Reply to This ]



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