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    dots Submission Name: Gamble, regret, high cards, and betdots
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    Author: silentpoison
    ASL Info:    22/F/Teh Shire
    Elite Ratio:    2.67 - 204/259/118
    Words: 172
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 675
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    dotsGamble, regret, high cards, and betdots
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    Can i play my aces high
    before i can get so low
    my cards are on the table
    and i've got a run for the show
    one hell of a poker face
    helps get me by
    winning this mindset
    in americas greatest dive
    a pool shark at heart
    can hustle them all
    8 ball
    corner pocket
    sinks in
    and falls
    I'm going all in
    the river is flipped
    my whole life's a gamble
    so when will i trip
    I stumble and crack
    my head on the floor
    staring at the ceiling
    waiting for more
    tables are spinning
    they call black number five
    I've lost but i'm grinning
    it isn't all about winning
    it's about reading reactions
    trying to get it right
    but tonight is for games
    too far in to lose
    So i'll play the jack of hearts
    and one more time
    I'll fool them all




    Submitted on 2008-06-25 00:31:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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