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Gamble, regret, high cards, and bet

Author: silentpoison
ASL Info:    22/F/Teh Shire
Elite Ratio:    2.67 - 204 /259 /118
Words: 172
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Gamble, regret, high cards, and bet

Can i play my aces high
before i can get so low
my cards are on the table
and i've got a run for the show
one hell of a poker face
helps get me by
winning this mindset
in americas greatest dive
a pool shark at heart
can hustle them all
8 ball
corner pocket
sinks in
and falls
I'm going all in
the river is flipped
my whole life's a gamble
so when will i trip
I stumble and crack
my head on the floor
staring at the ceiling
waiting for more
tables are spinning
they call black number five
I've lost but i'm grinning
it isn't all about winning
it's about reading reactions
trying to get it right
but tonight is for games
too far in to lose
So i'll play the jack of hearts
and one more time
I'll fool them all

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