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    dots Submission Name: the fishbowl we've built in the same small todots
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    Author: silentpoison
    ASL Info:    22/F/Teh Shire
    Elite Ratio:    2.67 - 204/259/118
    Words: 112
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsthe fishbowl we've built in the same small todots
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    Every message is in code
    Hoping one will find the meaning
    A different letter to denote
    Our olgitharm in rythem
    Denying to ourselves
    That the past won’t dictate the future
    When the past is all we have
    To push ourselves further
    We cary on like no one
    Could every find us
    Hidden in the trees
    Eyes behind the leaves
    But secretly
    We’re staring in the fishbowl
    We’ve built around these walls
    Staring at the cielings
    Hoping they will fall
    Looking at the stars
    Counting them for you
    Knowing that we’re laying
    Under the same full moon




    Submitted on 2008-06-25 00:32:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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