an arms race in your sk(prison)in
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an arms race in your sk(prison)in
We're losing signs of life no more laughter or heartfelt sighs we are the children of what they create starting WWIII using us as ammo in the newest arms race coutries colliding and freedoms in hiding it's canada's cold war and bomb shells are creating shelters underground just for safe keeping ideals falling like acid rain for our eating consumption of lies chewing through family ties while umbilical cords choking as we deepthroat your religion we smother it in smoke cause your lungs are collapsing you're breathing in ignorance and shitting out your free mind they'll sensor your hands so the deaf go unnoticed droves screaming out-loud but no ones stays focused take a deep breathe and fog up this paper is your vision just blurring or are we all sinking deeper Sucking it dry for 10 bucks an hour it Came to and went limp like you've been drinking for days cause time passes by and we're living 9-5 taking it hard just to live just to survive |
Submitted on 2008-06-25 01:45:34 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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| I honestly think that this is amazing. The pictures painted by the words are perfect, which is what I believe the writter is supposed to do. this sucked my in from beginning to end. "we smother it in smoke cause your lungs are collapsing you're breathing in ignorance and [censored]ting out your free mind" was my favorite part of this whole peice, it just stuck in my brain who blatantly ignorant so many people are. keep it up... ~Darkest Flaw~ | Posted on 2008-07-01 00:00:00 | by Darkest Flaw | [ Reply to This ] | Excellent, Excellent. i think you just made it into my favorites, with this piece of art. All the symbolism and metaphors just really hit home with this piece it's totally original and totally inspiring. Good work! | | Posted on 2008-06-26 00:00:00 | by jayisademon | [ Reply to This ] | |
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