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    dots Submission Name: Summer of Lovedots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 70
    Class/Type: Misc/Nature
    Total Views: 584
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 516



    Description:
       To live in the NOW
    requires no age
    All needed
    is presence
    You need not be prophet
    or Sage

    Smiles to share
    Happy Day!!!


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    dotsSummer of Lovedots
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    First official day of Summer
    Summer does not care
    for our calendars of months

    She comes when she and
    Mother Nature are ready
    there is no timing
    seconds, minutes, hours,
    days

    Our time is the
    harpsicord on which
    she plays
    Seasons songs of
    virtuoso ~
    we are merely notes

    For even in Summer
    the wind loves to dance
    Winter, Fall, Summer,
    Spring...
    holds no circumstance




    Submitted on 2008-06-25 10:00:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I loved this ode to nature and to the summer, Tiffany! The wind loving to dance whatever the season is priceless!

    Nice work, lovely lady!
    | Posted on 2008-08-28 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      Liked this look at summer! She certainly doesn't care what the calendar says. It was unseasonably cool here earlier this week, but today we are hot, Hot, HOT! As long as the wind dances, I might as well, too, and plan to spend more time in the yard and flower beds.

    Enjoy your day with nature, Tiff!

    Hugs, Sharon
    | Posted on 2008-06-26 00:00:00 | by Peggy Paris | [ Reply to This ]


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