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    dots Submission Name: The Sanctuarydots
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    Author: Piper
    ASL Info:    17/ Female/ Europe
    Elite Ratio:    2.78 - 31/41/27
    Words: 96
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 78
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 630



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    dotsThe Sanctuarydots
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    I needed to get away
    From this urban hell,
    But there was no one to help me
    I couldn't find my sanctuary.
    The pavement so hot under my feet
    I couldn't stand this anymore.
    Car crashes, deaths and isolation
    Degrading our emotions, amplifying our hate.

    I needed a muse, a nymph
    To take me away from here
    Lead me through the dark forests
    Leave me in the center of the woods
    Where there's nothing but the humming
    Of water, a waterfall above the cave
    A small ray of sunshine finding it's way through the leaves.




    Submitted on 2008-06-25 11:50:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow, I hope you get out of "this urban hell" soon! but really, I liked the way you painted scenes with your words. You've got talent.
    | Posted on 2008-06-25 00:00:00 | by Sparkster | [ Reply to This ]
      This is excellent, Eliza! It is brooding, and expresses your emotions so well; these are emotions all of us have felt at one time or another, and were hard pressed to express, which you have done marvelously here!

    Good work, lovely lady!
    | Posted on 2008-06-25 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]



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