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    dots Submission Name: not understanding.dots
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    Author: ashleynicolelt3
    Elite Ratio:    0.01 - 0/1/3
    Words: 80
    Class/Type: Poetry/BrokenHeart
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    i dont understand how life didnt help.
    i dont understand how i made the wrong choice.
    when everyone was telling me the right.
    i dont understand how i didnt listin to what was right.
    i dont understand how i can make a stupied ovious mistake so easily.
    i dont understand why i love them. i dont understand why i cant pick.
    i dont understand life.
    i dont understand love.
    help me to understand.?!




    Submitted on 2008-06-25 11:55:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow this piece is really contrived and repetitive. I'd definately rework this and make it a bit more original and make it where it doesn't sound so forced. It's a broken heart poem and it doesn't sound melancholy, just kinda whiny.
    | Posted on 2008-06-26 00:00:00 | by jayisademon | [ Reply to This ]



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