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    dots Submission Name: We are going to fail (villanelle)dots
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    Author: Duke Medhat
    ASL Info:    21/Male/Egypt
    Elite Ratio:    5.08 - 58/38/24
    Words: 154
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Description:
       This villanelle is about my final Exams in the faculty of law (law school) second year in the “El Mansoura” University.
    NB: I NEVER DRINK
    Dedication to my friend “Abd El Hameed” whom is the most likely to fail this year


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    dotsWe are going to fail (villanelle)dots
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    O my friends, we are going to fail
    Those hideous exams had vanquished us
    Would someone pass to me a pail of ale?

    The answers ran away, leaving no trail
    We left our papers white with little mess
    O my friends, we are going to fail

    Even cheating became of no avail
    As we all showed our signals of distress
    Would someone pass to me a pail of ale?

    Everywhere, all faces are getting pale
    Like a kid facing a speedy bus
    O my friends, we are going to fail

    Our marks had been swallowed by a whale
    Our results will speak loudly about us
    Would someone pass to me a pail of ale?

    Wherever you go, you see the blues of fail
    Blues spread everywhere in the campus
    O my friends, we are going to fail
    Would someone pass to me a pail of ale?




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      That was so, so FUNNY!!! LOL. I enjoyed it. Keep up the good work:)
    | Posted on 2008-06-26 00:00:00 | by Roselize | [ Reply to This ]


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