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    Author: PhalenSky
    ASL Info:    17/Female/Clarksville, MD
    Elite Ratio:    4.19 - 3/3/13
    Words: 291
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Venting
    Total Views: 51
    Average Vote:    3.0000
    Bytes: 1867



    Description:
       I wrote this based on how I've felt over the years when other kids made fun of me for having hearing-aids. In this song/poem, all of the people that ever made fun of me lose their hearing and I'm mocking them.


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    Listen up
    There's no words so you're going to have to listen up
    Listen up
    You're going to have to forget what it sounds like
    Listen up
    I don't want to stay around any longer than I have to
    You're going to have to listen up
    Just going to listen up

    I've got a secret
    A secret that'll make you scream
    But you're just going to have to suck it up
    You'll never know
    And I've been wanting to tell you this
    It seems so strange that I can't just let you know
    So you better just listen to the silence
    Because I can't tell you
    I don't even know what to feel

    Listen up
    There's no words you're going to have to Listen up
    You're going to forget what it sounds like
    Listen up
    I don't want to stay around any longer than I have to
    You're going to have to listen up

    Don't want to let you look down on me this time
    You won't have a reason why
    You can wait until Christmas but you still won't get my gift
    Because I have nothing to give
    Nothing to give

    I guess that I won't forgive you after all
    You're going to have to listen to no words
    And you're just going to have to suck it up
    You'll never know
    I don't want to stay around any longer than I have to
    You're going to have to listen up
    Just going to listen up

    Listen up
    There's no words you're going to have to Listen up
    You're going to forget what it sounds like
    Listen up
    I know that I'm done with you
    Not the other way around
    Just going to listen up




    Submitted on 2008-06-25 13:31:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      It gets confusing and I think "listen up" is used too much. Are you keeping a secret? Did you do something wrong? Or is it both? Neither? It gets confusing, you should clarify a bit more.
    | Posted on 2008-06-26 00:00:00 | by riotgrrl1881 | [ Reply to This ]



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