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    dots Submission Name: the perfect light of heavendots
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    Author: blackbird
    ASL Info:    31/male/reykjavik iceland
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 194/328/300
    Words: 171
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsthe perfect light of heavendots
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    it is one thing
    to possess a feeling
    & quite another
    to be possessed by it.
    & people
    have a tendency
    to fear the unknown
    so much so that it prevents
    them from ever knowing it.

    & still,
    the moss gathers
    in the palm of my eye
    for the one that i remind myself
    is new in every passing day.
    & all i want
    is to discover
    that newness
    in every possible way.

    to let go
    is a brave undoing.
    to let go
    out of love
    & compassion
    & with the understanding
    that all creatures
    must find their own path
    through the forest-always
    is a brave becoming.

    there is so much beauty
    in the world
    & the perfect light of heaven
    is amongst me.
    remember me as i were extinct,
    something to treasure
    when you're ready
    for your search for gold.
    i found mine
    where you placed it in my heart
    for the hiding.

    darling starling:
    you are such splendor
    of flower
    in my life.




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