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    dots Submission Name: I miss youdots
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    Author: DAlin
    Elite Ratio:    2.13 - 82/137/71
    Words: 71
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsI miss youdots
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    You know I love you more and more
    You know it's you who I adore,
    You know my tears are made of gold
    Without you here...it's oh so cold.

    Picture me when you are sad
    Picture me when you are mad,
    Look at me and smile my love
    You are an angel from above.

    We'll be toghether
    I'll be there
    We have my dear...a love so rare.





    Submitted on 2008-06-25 18:45:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Rhymes are fine and dandy, but don't get caught in the trap of feeling the need to. Also remember you can ryme a few lines and not the whole poem
    | Posted on 2008-06-27 00:00:00 | by nicodemous | [ Reply to This ]



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