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    dots Submission Name: My Handicapdots
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    Author: vanhokinshtyl
    ASL Info:    8/M/UK
    Elite Ratio:    3.09 - 119/200/71
    Words: 227
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 715
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1596



    Description:
       the able are the disabled. We have the handicap.


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    No, you're wrong, you can't even imagine,
    Things aren't how they seem
    Like an animal, struggling to survive any way he can
    When living is always limited

    And he's not saying much at all
    But neither are we
    At least he tries
    At most our life's a luxury

    Wear his skin [as a suit]
    Would you feel misplaced?
    Like nobody knows your name
    Feel distant or erased?
    Not worthy to communicate?

    And if you think you had a bad day,
    Just consider this,
    Every day is hard for him, and he's still more content than you,
    he still smiles,
    (That's) My handicap..

    Maybe he was put here to help us realize
    Because it surely wasn't for his benefit,
    He doesn't feel impulsed to impress with some disguise
    Maybe that's what makes him different,
    Not intricate

    There's no reason to feel sorry
    he only feels empathy,
    Because he knows we take all of our steps for granted
    There's no reason to laugh at him,
    He's just laughing back at you
    There's a reason he was put here
    and he's provided the clue
    (But he's not saying much...)

    He sings:
    "There's nothing you can say that's gonna bring me down,
    There's nothing you can do to ever bring me down,
    I'm unbreakable,
    This chain is set in place,
    and nothing can break it."




    Submitted on 2008-06-26 03:12:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Excellent Excellent write my Friend!!!
    I have a little sister who has Downs syndrome and trust me I know exactly of the sentiment you are speaking of
    These people are true and genuine
    They only know Love they cannot feel negativity
    I congratulate you on an excellent write filled with truth and worded perfectly
    Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
    Thank You
    God Bless
    Ron
    | Posted on 2008-06-27 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]


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