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    dots Submission Name: Pandora's Boxdots
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    Author: _Osiris_
    ASL Info:    18 Chick Ottawa
    Elite Ratio:    0.47 - 1/5/56
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 120
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 666



    Description:
       Inspired by both a person and a dream.
    I hope they see what truely is for them cause they seem to be drowning.


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    dotsPandora's Boxdots
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    Locked in a carved wooden box
    Impenetrable to most but one
    Immersed into a sea of emotion
    In competition with time
    To break free from this watery grave
    Cause your ego is to blame
    Concealed by your hatred
    With ears stitched shut
    Left with your slience to destroy
    A piece of stone where your heart once dwelled
    To weight you down for all your sins

    Were too self-involved to see
    That you lived a immaculate life
    A romance worth existence itself
    With her as your bride to be
    Relentless joy to come
    With your unborn son
    To carry on your legacy




    Submitted on 2008-06-26 12:52:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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