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    dots Submission Name: Empty Boatdots
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    Author: PhalenSky
    ASL Info:    17/Female/Clarksville, MD
    Elite Ratio:    4.19 - 3/3/13
    Words: 111
    Class/Type: Poetry/Death
    Total Views: 61
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 683



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    dotsEmpty Boatdots
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    I plunge into the depths of that icy blue sea
    The color of your blank eyes
    Staring back at me
    The choppy water in which you fell
    Swirling dangerously
    All around me
    In this empty boat
    Empty of you empty of me
    There's a dead weight at the bottom
    But it is neither you nor is it me
    But rather it is our ghosts
    Ghosts of us
    Ghosts of ourselves
    That we left behind
    I remember calling for help
    But none came
    Now it seems like ages ago
    And now the two of us just drift away
    Wash away
    Waste away
    In this empty boat
    Empty of you empty of me




    Submitted on 2008-06-26 13:17:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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