Hi Phil. Impressive The vividness, the red the shape all combined to be thought provoking. That you achieved quite well as the comments do bring forward. Lips are mainly for speaking endearments, addressing and lastly caressing. The red we in colour therapy see many manifestations in colour and well. Summer is beautiful vibrant and soft and alluring and shown in red and yellow colour. I read endless words of endearment, life’s passions and beautifully crafted contoured exquisite shaped resort for passions of the heart (not mind). You owe me one, remember? Good stuff. Joachim.
Now, "Summer's last resort" I am at a lost of whether you mean resort, like a last attempt, or last resort, like a place where one stays, and I think you meant to do that too. I take it as her last desperate attempt. This haiku says so much in so little words, and I think you can guess that it means the resort the verb because it's a lisp-red post card, and that seems so seductive, which is probably why you chose to use that image. I really like this, because it seems to me about a girl trying to get someone and is using any means necessary even if it degrades her. This was good.
Be well,
~Azura*
The picture you used in this little ditty of yours really adds a form of sensuality to this write
I thought this was very clever very vivid and very descriptive
God Bless
Ron
Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
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Ron
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