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    dots Submission Name: I Want to Be What You Need Me to Bedots
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    Author: EEKS
    Elite Ratio:    2.84 - 647/1072/602
    Words: 322
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
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    dotsI Want to Be What You Need Me to Bedots
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    Baby sister, I am so sorry I never saw you
    Hey little sister, I'm so sorry I never held you
    and I'm sorry I never heard you like you heard me
    I'm so sorry
    Baby sister, don't feel so lonely
    I'm doing your dishes and washing your sheets
    Don't start to miss me

    Little girl, I never told you that you were perfect
    I never said you were good enough
    I never tried to make it up to you
    Little girl, I never tried that hard for us
    I didn't know I had to but now I do
    I'll make it up to you

    Baby sister, I'm sorry I never played your games
    I'm sorry I never knew you were so sad
    I'm sorry I never tried to get inside you
    and little sister I wasn't the best you could've had
    but I'll try to make things better
    Please don't feel like you're alone

    Little girl, I never told you that you were perfect
    I never said you were just fine fine fine, I never spent enough time getting to know you
    Little girl, I'm sorry I didn't speak to you
    I'll make it up to you
    I'll do whatever you need me to do

    Baby sister, I know I never saw you
    I'm sorry I didn't try to get to know you a little bit more
    I'm sorry I never heard you trying to make it better
    Little sister, I saw you crying when mom and dad were fighting and I didn't care
    I'm sorry I couldn't be there for you
    I know he yells at you
    I'm sorry I couldn't understand

    Little girl, I'm sorry I never told you were perfect
    I never said you were good enough, that you'd done enough
    Little one, I'll do whatever I have to do
    To make it up to you
    I'll do whatever you need me to do




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