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    dots Submission Name: FEARdots
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    Author: ConfusionAngel
    ASL Info:    17/Female/Inside my mind
    Elite Ratio:    2.91 - 1/2/2
    Words: 40
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
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    dotsFEARdots
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    Memories can fade away
    But nightmares last forever

    Happiness begins the day
    But sorrow is soon after

    Positive and negative
    And anger comes abruptly

    What am I supposed to do when all these things currupt me?




    Submitted on 2008-06-27 13:51:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      YAY!! I"m your first commenter (of course this was done at my house lol)

    AWESOME! Of course. You're a great writer Kari. Can't wait till you get more on here. (Since I've read so few) TTYL

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    | Posted on 2008-06-27 00:00:00 | by MinervaBlu | [ Reply to This ]


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