Description: A song I wrote but also works as good poetry, tell me what you think of it, and don't mind my comments earlier I actually do want advice, I was just being close-minded... thank-you!
Angle of your eyes
Light perception
Glorious wings of my deception
Help me fly
Help me get away
Deciet
Colliding with my lies
Fabled talks
Of reality arise
Questioning your god
Toungue swollen
I can't talk
Horns a grown'
Teeth a snappin'
Soul a flowin'
Satan a clappin'
Body, expires
But soul eternal
Water, couldn't douse your fires
Cold eyes are stern and all
Your demons
And all
The angels
Couldn't back you down from your decision
As all frown
Couldn't grasp your vision
You wouldn't listen
To your hyprocrysms
Now we all suffer
Choked on your supper
Angle of your eyes
Light perception
Glorious wings of my deception
Help me fly
Help me fly
Help me fly
Help me get away!
Submission Name: Submissive
