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    dots Submission Name: Comedots
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    Author: bas
    ASL Info:    24/f/somewhere...
    Elite Ratio:    4.94 - 42/48/35
    Words: 100
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 31
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 748



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    dotsComedots
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    Come, come near

    to the surface...



    Pain creeps forward

    melodicically swinging

    in this fear

    with the force of a thousand

    bleeding screams



    There, beyond

    swollen wounds

    I know you a&#153;re dwelling

    Come to me, come closer



    The taste of you

    is intoxicating

    Let me feel you

    with my soul.



    come, come near

    closer still



    bone to bone

    skin to skin

    becoming a part

    of me.




    Submitted on 2008-06-28 02:32:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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