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    dots Submission Name: The Talking Cloudsdots
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    Author: garnet4david
    ASL Info:    20/M/Indonesia
    Elite Ratio:    4.18 - 81/83/58
    Words: 106
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 51
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 655



    Description:
       I would like to know whether this one is romantic or not. Any suggestions or recommendations are welcomed. Actually i plan to use this poetry to express my feeling to a girl.

    I never have any feeling for her, but since she talked to me for the first time. Now, it has grown from the feel for friend, into the feel of love.


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    dotsThe Talking Cloudsdots
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    Why the clouds seem pretty?
    Because i never take a look at them.
    Since when i like to gaze at it?
    That was since it first talked to me.

    The wind blew a seed along,
    it then stayed inside my heart.
    Tears flowed as the summer rain,
    and grew it into a beautiful rose.

    Everytime you stare at my eyes,
    can you see any reflection?
    A beautiful picture of a princess,
    that is sweeter than anything.

    A hundred steps exist between us,
    i took ninenty nines steps for you.
    I can no longer walk further,
    would you take the last step for me?




    Submitted on 2008-06-28 05:51:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Wow... the last stanza is the most romantic, and yes, this is a romantic poem. I can't imagine why you felt you had to ask because you probably were feeling the feelings when you wrote this. If you were feeling romance when you wrote the poem, then it's a romantic poem. And if I had somebody read this to me, I would be very flattered. I can understand how you feel in this, too, and it's incredibly sweet. I wish you all the luck, and you should read this to her. Anyone who affects your work is affecting your soul, and deserves to know.
    Be well,
    ~Azura*
    | Posted on 2008-06-28 00:00:00 | by EmpathicAya | [ Reply to This ]



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