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    dots Submission Name: Unrealdots
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    Author: Lilyan
    ASL Info:    18/female
    Elite Ratio:    2.2 - 26/26/16
    Words: 117
    Class/Type: Misc/Serious
    Total Views: 93
    Average Vote:    4.5000
    Bytes: 663



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       Thoughts of mine. Tell me what you think about these thoughts


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    dotsUnrealdots
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    I just know, that we aren't alone. I just feel that there is something out there. We don't see it, but i feel it. Something unexplained and wonderful. Something what we couldn't imagine. I haven't seen any of these wonders, because i am just a simple person. My eyes are closed, my ears don't hear, but my mind tells me something, something unreal. But i have those questions, nobody can't answere, i know there are some "chosen ones". Their eyes are opened, they see it well, but they can't explain or can not just tell. I wish that i could be one. I wish that i could see, and hear. I just wish that this comes real.




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