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Win or Lose

Author: geekyslacker
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answer the question

Win or Lose

When a right is taken away,

Should one of weaker mind just concede,
to the eloquent aggressor?

For the sake of keeping peace, even if it is known that the other did wrong.

When words of defense don't come to mind,

Should one just surrender?

Submitted on 2008-06-28 14:30:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I didnt really understand this one, i mean i understood most of it. i just dont get it...

yup im dumb.
| Posted on 2009-05-28 00:00:00 | by BusterLILblock | [ Reply to This ]
  Funny. I know what that's like. Actually, I'm trying to come up with something right now.
I guess I'll say that truth is loved by God, no matter what it concerns, and that you can't ever surrender and accept a false thing. Sometimes we don't have a choice but to keep quiet...but never give in.
life is short anyway.
| Posted on 2009-04-13 00:00:00 | by coloredstone | [ Reply to This ]
  thats always the dilama.its hard. i dont know.
| Posted on 2008-09-24 00:00:00 | by DaGrimReaperess | [ Reply to This ]

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