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    dots Submission Name: Liabilitydots
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    Author: geekyslacker
    ASL Info:    21/f/tx
    Elite Ratio:    1.92 - 12/19/8
    Words: 73
    Class/Type: Poetry/Friendship
    Total Views: 89
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 435



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    dotsLiabilitydots
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    If you want to call me that go ahead.

    For I can only be this.

    By(my own actions) your standards I have been reduced to such.

    Now I realize the hazardousness of affection.
    I know that I wont be reflected upon,

    I know I won't be sought after.

    Just let me enjoy this short time.

    For all I want is a fraction of what you won't give.




    Submitted on 2008-06-28 14:47:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I loooooooooooooooooooove this one!!!...it's so true...
    | Posted on 2008-09-24 00:00:00 | by Jaiknob | [ Reply to This ]
      mad kool. i lyke the hazerdness of affection.
    | Posted on 2008-08-22 00:00:00 | by DaGrimReaperess | [ Reply to This ]


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