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Liability


Author: geekyslacker
ASL Info:    28/f/tx
Elite Ratio:    2.34 - 64 /41 /14
Words: 73
Class/Type: Poetry /Friendship
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Liability


If you want to call me that go ahead.

For I can only be this.

By(my own actions) your standards I have been reduced to such.

Now I realize the hazardousness of affection.
I know that I wont be reflected upon,

I know I won't be sought after.

Just let me enjoy this short time.

For all I want is a fraction of what you won't give.




Submitted on 2008-06-28 14:47:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I really like this one, its touching.
As humans, everyone has faults and some lean and some stand straight, neither knowing what they are doing till the end. till there is no one leaning on them or till no one is their to lean on. and some dont realize the importance if others.
there is nothing we can do, unless we speak up.

Fana
| Posted on 2009-05-28 00:00:00 | by BusterLILblock | [ Reply to This ]
  I loooooooooooooooooooove this one!!!...it's so true...
| Posted on 2008-09-24 00:00:00 | by Jaiknob | [ Reply to This ]
  mad kool. i lyke the hazerdness of affection.
| Posted on 2008-08-22 00:00:00 | by DaGrimReaperess | [ Reply to This ]


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