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    dots Submission Name: [ I need to get drunk off the prospect of possibildots
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    Author: Ali Marie
    Elite Ratio:    2.85 - 103/104/75
    Words: 138
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dots[ I need to get drunk off the prospect of possibildots
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    I need to get drunk off the prospect of possibility
    I need to dip into the ocean and feel nothing below me
    but water
    I need to feel the earth move underneath me
    I need to realize that you're never coming back
    I should have realized that I couldn't keep you
    there's too much to write on a page
    too much to think about
    I want to be in your arms
    but I want you far from me
    I can't think of why I let you get to me
    I don't really remember what you said that was so
    captivating
    I'm so tired of drama and acting like we're 14
    Please give me a reason to let this go
    and let you just be my friend who I can easily
    lose touch with




    Submitted on 2008-06-28 14:52:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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