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    dots Submission Name: My Paraplegic Love Pt. 2dots
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    Author: geekyslacker
    ASL Info:    28/f/tx
    Elite Ratio:    2.34 - 64/41/14
    Words: 65
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsMy Paraplegic Love Pt. 2dots
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    My thoughts on by turn to you.

    That cannot be easily altered.

    I badly want to let go of this lie.

    But there is enjoyment in make believe.

    We all strive and hope for something.

    You are the dream i aspire to.

    Alas, if both this and reality are but illusions,

    then what do I truly posses?




    Submitted on 2008-06-28 15:05:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I think that its sweet , every word of it. if only i had a microphone for you to scream it in.

    Fana
    | Posted on 2009-05-28 00:00:00 | by BusterLILblock | [ Reply to This ]
      not sanity!!!....lol....for truly u're lost in de wrld of confusion...sooner or laater will meet in dat weird wrld...it's so tru how we enjoy make-belief n lies....
    | Posted on 2008-09-24 00:00:00 | by Jaiknob | [ Reply to This ]
      u posses a dream to live for.

    i lyke the language u use and how everything flowed in this part and 2.


    very koool. ur poetry is awesome. (=


    rip n rot
    Grim

    | Posted on 2008-08-21 00:00:00 | by DaGrimReaperess | [ Reply to This ]


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