My Paraplegic Love Pt. 2

Author: geekyslacker ASL Info:    28/f/tx Elite Ratio:    2.34 - 64 /41 /14 Words: 65

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My Paraplegic Love Pt. 2

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My thoughts on by turn to you. That cannot be easily altered. I badly want to let go of this lie. But there is enjoyment in make believe. We all strive and hope for something. You are the dream i aspire to. Alas, if both this and reality are but illusions, then what do I truly posses?

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I think that its sweet , every word of it. if only i had a microphone for you to scream it in. Fana

| Posted on 2009-05-28 00:00:00 | by BusterLILblock | [ Reply to This ]

not sanity!!!....lol....for truly u're lost in de wrld of confusion...sooner or laater will meet in dat weird wrld...it's so tru how we enjoy make-belief n lies....

| Posted on 2008-09-24 00:00:00 | by Jaiknob | [ Reply to This ]

u posses a dream to live for. i lyke the language u use and how everything flowed in this part and 2. very koool. ur poetry is awesome. (= rip n rot Grim

| Posted on 2008-08-21 00:00:00 | by DaGrimReaperess | [ Reply to This ]

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