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My Paraplegic Love Pt. 2

Author: geekyslacker
ASL Info:    28/f/tx
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Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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very hard .

My Paraplegic Love Pt. 2

My thoughts on by turn to you.

That cannot be easily altered.

I badly want to let go of this lie.

But there is enjoyment in make believe.

We all strive and hope for something.

You are the dream i aspire to.

Alas, if both this and reality are but illusions,

then what do I truly posses?

Submitted on 2008-06-28 15:05:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I think that its sweet , every word of it. if only i had a microphone for you to scream it in.

| Posted on 2009-05-28 00:00:00 | by BusterLILblock | [ Reply to This ]
  not sanity!!! truly u're lost in de wrld of confusion...sooner or laater will meet in dat weird's so tru how we enjoy make-belief n lies....
| Posted on 2008-09-24 00:00:00 | by Jaiknob | [ Reply to This ]
  u posses a dream to live for.

i lyke the language u use and how everything flowed in this part and 2.

very koool. ur poetry is awesome. (=

rip n rot

| Posted on 2008-08-21 00:00:00 | by DaGrimReaperess | [ Reply to This ]

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