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    dots Submission Name: Tall Cottondots
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    Author: jkhutchings
    Elite Ratio:    1.21 - 3/7/24
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsTall Cottondots
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    the boy dragged
    the long bag along
    his hands gingerly
    picking at bushes
    a white softness
    belied by hard husk
    tears his tender skin
    until it bleeds
    looking to his
    father for comfort
    he only hears
    gruff words
    sun burns his face
    as sweat pours
    running down his
    burnt neck
    a day seems
    to be eternity
    clomping through
    the wet earth
    wanting to please
    wishing it over
    his bag never full
    the day ends
    ninety five cents
    meager redemption
    dad vows to never
    bring him back






    Submitted on 2008-06-28 18:36:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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