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    dots Submission Name: Gentle Is The Handdots
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    Author: zaaclindsay
    Elite Ratio:    0.52 - 0/1/1
    Words: 108
    Class/Type: Poetry/Religious
    Total Views: 46
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    Description:
       This poem was written in faith in answer to someone who asked why I don't live wild anymore. I hope it answered it satisfactorily.

    It's also because I was more worried about being someone than the genuineness of the other person. So it's also a statement saying, ok god i'm done being hard headed, so we're gonna do it your way


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    dotsGentle Is The Handdots
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    Gentle is the Hand
    that formed a heart
    to calm the storms
    behind these deep green eyes.

    Loving is the Hand
    that molds her soul for mine,
    the way she'll cup my face
    as she kisses me.

    Gracious is the Hand
    that weaves her life
    in the colors of my dreams,
    and of fabric safe and warm.

    Tender is the Hand
    that lent her breath
    to carry whispered pleasures
    to my passion's dancing flame.

    And steady is the Hand
    that guides my path
    to hands made for loving me,
    that strain to touch me from within.

    Gentle is the Hand of the Master.




    Submitted on 2008-06-28 22:15:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is an okay piece. It just doesn't really have any kind of flair to it, and that makes it kind of droll.
    | Posted on 2008-06-30 00:00:00 | by jayisademon | [ Reply to This ]



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