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    dots Submission Name: It's better to burn outdots
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    Author: HimeManko
    ASL Info:    19/F/PA
    Elite Ratio:    0.44 - 6/3/16
    Words: 182
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Depressed
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    dotsIt's better to burn outdots
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    I sit in my own company with feelings that leave me dizzy and breathless without the whole "I love you" "I love you too" nightcaps.
    I speak words that come out as gibberish and by tomorrow I'll forget this feeling.
    They say that diamonds are a girls best friend, well baby will you be my diamond.
    Frozen fingertips let me know winter is blowing hard but I won't mind.
    As long as I have you my cancer friends.
    The smoke of my cigarette dances with the wind. I wish I was like you. I dream to be like you! So free and ever giving!
    You love the feeling of being kissed by a foreign mouth every time, you embrace it!
    Then you happily die out within a couple minutes. No goodbyes or sad thoughts. You known your place, Your purpose in life.
    But here I am vulnerable, It fucking sucks to be human
    And then I smile.
    You give me that boast I need, like a heroin addict you are my hero
    See you again in a few hours my love




    Submitted on 2008-06-29 23:30:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I really like this piece. The whole ode to a cigarette, I totally understand that. I really love the line "like a heroin addict, you are my hero" that is just a sick line. Keep it up
    | Posted on 2008-06-30 00:00:00 | by jayisademon | [ Reply to This ]



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