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    dots Submission Name: Memoirs of Naturedots
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    Author: realpoet
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    dotsMemoirs of Naturedots
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    Born was I when the Earth was formed,
    mingling with gases ; playing in dust;
    forming oceans ; planting grasses;
    sexing creatures and giving them lust
    to populate the everywhere.

    As for me, I joined the forces
    up the stairs and down beneath;
    little did I comprehend
    what a mess were the courses
    of joy and mingled grief.

    some how or other nothing was satisfied
    to live their time as was planned,
    but so it is when growing up,
    wisdom failed when stupor fanned
    its pleasant air all gratified.

    Soon I came of age and married
    the Sun that scortched the Earth;
    I plowed the furrows for seed of seasons
    and found migrations hurried
    to climes addressed to their reasons.


    The more the old I got,
    I forgot to teach the recent born of man
    to not destroy that which held
    the regions of water from sand,
    thus there came encroaching hell.

    Deathly ill I became
    as man in wish dismembered me
    and changed my mind of protect of him;
    he took my arms from around the trees
    and spread my feet across asphalt seas.

    Hot seasons battled with frozen ones
    and laughed at melting ice of seas
    that man had caused the done undone
    when mountains bowed to coal's disease
    and friction of machines became hot as sun.


    I cried and shouted, "Help save me !"
    but only a few did respond
    yet not until the intolerable sea
    threatened to make the land a pond,
    Now I wonder will man save him and me.




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