Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: How to Build a Medots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: BlazeFlamme
    ASL Info:    22/m/TX
    Elite Ratio:    1.81 - 23/160/138
    Words: 208
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 484
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1286



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsHow to Build a Medots
    -------------------------------------------


    You can deny the reason 'til the end of time
    I know where your heart resides
    You can search forever but you'll never find
    Someone else to bring your tides

    While you deny think about it
    What are you denying for?
    Try accepting, it helps a bit
    Things will improve I'm sure

    When you are alone with him something's missing
    You feel it, yet you shrug it away
    Hold that thought next time, quit resisting
    Next time you come back you should stay

    Give it a chance it only gets better
    We've already breached the hardest part
    My arms are open, we belong together
    It'll get easier once you pass the start

    My home is you, your home is me
    We would both end up better off
    We were destined, don't you see?
    But I guess I could be wrong

    So I cross my fingers, wish on a star
    I pray to god seven days a week
    I plead for you back, you feel so far
    You were always all I would seek

    Pain builds character I've heard before
    But I've lost you and I lost my dad
    If pain builds character then in my core
    Character is all I will have




    Submitted on 2008-06-30 02:17:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    163160

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    mimicry written by expiring_touch
    an unashamed poverty written by Daniel Barlow
    You read free written by poetotoe
    More then just goodbye written by faideddarkness
    Yes written by poetotoe
    a safe place written by Daniel Barlow
    Fasade written by jackz
    Silent Screams In Silent Dreams written by poetotoe
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (7) written by endlessgame23
    i've missed written by mysalvation
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (2) written by endlessgame23
    Deep Into A World Of Despair written by DeathTone
    Carry written by saartha
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (3) written by endlessgame23
    The Unicorn written by BlazeFlamme
    Waiting written by Daniel Barlow
    prison written by ShyOne
    Journey written by endlessgame23
    Or are we written in the sand? written by Chelebel
    PEARL (Exclusive Poem) 10th Anniversary... written by Cordell
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (final) written by endlessgame23
    I, Plutarch written by HisNameIsNoMore
    the testing of hypotheses written by Daniel Barlow
    Shi written by ShyOne
    Cosmic Dreams written by Chelebel
    winners circle written by ShyOne
    Records I written by Raphael
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (6) written by endlessgame23
    a mood to be free written by Daniel Barlow
    Your Lover written by Cordell

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry