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    dots Submission Name: How to Build a Medots
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    Author: BlazeFlamme
    ASL Info:    22/m/TX
    Elite Ratio:    1.81 - 23/160/138
    Words: 208
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsHow to Build a Medots
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    You can deny the reason 'til the end of time
    I know where your heart resides
    You can search forever but you'll never find
    Someone else to bring your tides

    While you deny think about it
    What are you denying for?
    Try accepting, it helps a bit
    Things will improve I'm sure

    When you are alone with him something's missing
    You feel it, yet you shrug it away
    Hold that thought next time, quit resisting
    Next time you come back you should stay

    Give it a chance it only gets better
    We've already breached the hardest part
    My arms are open, we belong together
    It'll get easier once you pass the start

    My home is you, your home is me
    We would both end up better off
    We were destined, don't you see?
    But I guess I could be wrong

    So I cross my fingers, wish on a star
    I pray to god seven days a week
    I plead for you back, you feel so far
    You were always all I would seek

    Pain builds character I've heard before
    But I've lost you and I lost my dad
    If pain builds character then in my core
    Character is all I will have




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