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    dots Submission Name: Voyage through lifedots
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    Author: nash
    Elite Ratio:    1.62 - 0/0/1
    Words: 161
    Class/Type: Poetry/Happy
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       Just at the most important benchmark of my life, I've tried to float my thoughts into words.


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    dotsVoyage through lifedots
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    My mind yonders
    Beyond the horizons of the bright blue sky,
    However meek the sluggish slush of a snail may be
    My naked eye still watches it
    The delicate sway of the leaf
    Tumultuous wind is to blame, the screech of the green
    “Come into hiding” seems rueful.
    Trying to sketch sense of a mere feeling,
    May be as historic as the imaginative lead (pencil) line of a painting
    Or as
    Music swelling upto the rhythmic beats.
    On analyzing it boils down to being not so photogenic to the world
    In a secret,
    It’s a whole blaze of white carnations and tulips
    Yet brighter than the strong almighty Sun
    I surrender my soul to the mystical tantra
    To make this journey from one abode to the other
    As blissful as heaven.
    “If I may”
    I wish for true belongingness
    For, I’m still waiting on time to tell its story.


    nash






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