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    dots Submission Name: To be differentdots
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    Author: Lilyan
    ASL Info:    1 Elite Years
    Elite Ratio:    2.56 - 42/38/26
    Words: 151
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Misc
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    Do you know what feeling is to be different? I think some knows it well. And so do I.
    I feel like they are watching me, carefully, they observe my every move, they talk about me with a loud voice, just to be sure I hear. They point at me, sometimes they even laugh at me and they hurt me with words. They think that these words don't hurt anybody, but they do. They just try to keep away from me and follow to the others. They try to be like the popular ones instead of being theirselves. I hope that someday the realize what damage they had made in childhood to deiiferent persons. But I am still different, and don't follow them, I always stay kind, nice and optimistic. And i still have friends who understands. Don't forget that to be different is to be something special.




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      To be different is to be yourself. Well, that's what I think. Everyone is unique in their own way, and it's nice to know that although people may look at you oddly, there exists those who know and accept you for who you truly are. :)
    | Posted on 2008-07-03 00:00:00 | by whchong | [ Reply to This ]
      I know what it feels like to be different. The things you wrote are true!! You describe how it feels to be unpopular extremely well. Excellent text! A few people from my class would do well to read it.

    - Rose
    | Posted on 2008-07-03 00:00:00 | by Roselize | [ Reply to This ]


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