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    dots Submission Name: Shardsdots
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    Author: Roselize
    Elite Ratio:    2.92 - 21/26/19
    Words: 68
    Class/Type: Poetry/Broken
    Total Views: 66
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 468



    Description:
       I was bored when I wrote this. I don't really feel that way. No worries :)


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    dotsShardsdots
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    Shattered, broken, blown away,
    Desperate, cold and gone astray,
    Let my icy grave be red,
    Let me smile ere I am dead,

    Let me scream and let me shout,
    Let me get my feelings out,
    Don't remember, don't forget,
    Don't be glad and don't regret,

    Shattered, broken, blown away,
    Desperate, cold and gone astray,
    Never ask me why I write,
    Let me fade into the night




    Submitted on 2008-06-30 09:26:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Very Very well put together
    This write has an excellent rhythm to it and if you say it fast enough a couple of times in a row it actually flows like a nursery rhyme
    The sentiment hidden behind your words is very sad but honestly you were able to express your true feelings incredibly easy in this one
    GREAT JOB!!
    Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
    Thank You
    God Bless
    Ron
    | Posted on 2008-07-01 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]



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