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    dots Submission Name: At the Gynecologist's Officedots
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    Author: annie0888
    ASL Info:    44/f/LA
    Elite Ratio:    5.59 - 279/246/75
    Words: 110
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 53
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    dotsAt the Gynecologist's Officedots
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    Rows and rows of charts on file
    beyond translucent glass
    tell her she’s one of many
    not his one and only
    Yet she disrobes on demand
    disrobes in an exam room
    large enough for him and her
    and his approving nurse
    She sits barely on fresh butcher paper
    only a folded sheet to cover her
    tender armpits to shaven knees
    Near the sink a single file lies –
    her name alone tabbed at the edge
    He keeps this scrapbook of her submissions
    recording every scraping, every lump
    each bad cell and unchecked growth
    every press of his gloved fingers





    Submitted on 2008-06-30 10:51:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      As a female I found your poem uncomfortable because of the reality within, let me explain...I have been the lady with a file (from their point of view) and the lady unrobing and feeling vulnerable and at their mercy (from my point of view). Your poetry made this image very clear to me and thats why I found it uncomfortable. In my opinion, it takes a good artist/poet to bring this sort of vision to life and I congradulate you for that. Well done. Mel.
    | Posted on 2008-06-30 00:00:00 | by litllost | [ Reply to This ]
      This is one really powerful and personal poem
    I congratulate you on having the strength to let these emotions out and put them on paper so they dont weigh you down anymore
    I really like the way this came together and how you explained the whole procedure
    EXCELLENT WORK!!
    Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
    Thank You
    God Bless
    Ron
    | Posted on 2008-06-30 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]



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