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    dots Submission Name: Kill Kill Killdots
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    Author: arodase
    Elite Ratio:    4.36 - 17/19/20
    Words: 108
    Class/Type: Poetry/
    Total Views: 90
    Average Vote:    3.0000
    Bytes: 678



    Description:
       Release stress

    Heehee don't worry I am just scaring you for my amusement. *Smiles*


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    dotsKill Kill Killdots
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    I’ll kill any girl who comes near you
    Kill smash pummel gorge
    Ha ha ha ha

    Sweet ways to kill
    Kill her heart
    Kill her soul
    Smash her head

    Yay

    I’ll laugh and cry
    As I cut her skin open
    A dash of salt, smile

    When she calls you again
    The handphone will crackle
    Her eardrums will explode

    Hee hee ho ho

    I love you and only you
    Love is selfish and you know why
    If you leave me I’ll cleave you into half
    And me along with you
    Our pieces will mesh together
    And no one can separate us anymore




    Submitted on 2008-06-30 11:28:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This was written very well. I have to say though I'm usually a peaceful person.... I loved this... I feel this way about my love. I wouldn't kill... or maim... or even speak ill of... But I would feel the want to... lol This was a fantastic write. Keep up the amazing work, and I'll keep reading

    Haely
    | Posted on 2008-07-01 00:00:00 | by MinervaBlu | [ Reply to This ]
      I think you ment a dash of salt not a dice of salt.
    | Posted on 2008-06-30 00:00:00 | by nicodemous | [ Reply to This ]



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